tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post5361405762772544590..comments2024-02-18T07:27:48.299-08:00Comments on Amparo Ortiz: Just Kiss Already BLOGFEST!Amparo Ortizhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05751368034351196820noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-936828092531423782011-02-15T12:10:03.714-08:002011-02-15T12:10:03.714-08:00THANK YOU for hating my meanness :D Do you have AN...THANK YOU for hating my meanness :D Do you have ANY IDEA how freaked out I was that none of you awesome people would like my snippet??? *wipes sweat from brow*<br /><br />And yes, Constantine is a douche :) Can't say why, though. Hopefully, you'll all get to find out someday *crosses fingers*<br /><br />Time to edit this baby!!Amparo Ortizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05751368034351196820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-44655159391249445502011-02-14T23:11:29.107-08:002011-02-14T23:11:29.107-08:00That was so mean! You totally left me wanting to r...That was so mean! You totally left me wanting to read more...great scene!<br /><b><a href="http://nitewriter6.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Edge of Your Seat Romance</a></b>Raquel Byrneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12870113745683162915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-63428954129376634942011-02-14T20:28:27.392-08:002011-02-14T20:28:27.392-08:00"This was supposed to be my first kiss."..."This was supposed to be my first kiss."-I think a lot of people can relate to this. Love the tension in the ending too.Jennifer Hoffinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07616744694563644199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-35911240746737062882011-02-14T15:15:20.810-08:002011-02-14T15:15:20.810-08:00I love the line about how the blood pumped down ar...I love the line about how the blood pumped down arteries she never knew she had. I don't know who Constantine is, but I don't like him very much right now either.Tracyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03726858055689145824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-14387042700769083322011-02-14T11:14:51.261-08:002011-02-14T11:14:51.261-08:00A delicious kiss and an untimely interruption - da...A delicious kiss and an untimely interruption - damn! ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-3503764516223170652011-02-14T10:35:06.825-08:002011-02-14T10:35:06.825-08:00"You can picture the most important moments o..."You can picture the most important moments of your life before they happen. You can build an image of the setting, the words exchanged, and the best outcome possible. But when the moment arrives, you realize your image could never compete with the real deal."<- I love this. I really related to it. <br /><br />Also! the rest was excellent. And that ending! I want more lady!!!Melissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12096764010151024050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-20209111956409035302011-02-14T10:35:06.533-08:002011-02-14T10:35:06.533-08:00WHOA! What was that last bit?????????????????????
...WHOA! What was that last bit?????????????????????<br />Okay, sorry, for the questionmark craze. But... the cliffhanger!Alkyonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13737181562604721924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-49070878034221303522011-02-14T10:33:55.880-08:002011-02-14T10:33:55.880-08:00You sure know how to keep everyone on edge! lol I ...You sure know how to keep everyone on edge! lol I have so many questions I may have to shoot you an email to find out whats going on if my curiosity makes me. :)Jennhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16796597536718545426noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-46463052425826789502011-02-14T10:18:48.314-08:002011-02-14T10:18:48.314-08:00Wow! That's gripping! I so want to read this t...Wow! That's gripping! I so want to read this to find out whose voice that was, and why they're in a hospital cafeteria in the first place. So much going on in 250 words.Katrina L. Lantzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06871272394922775923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-18885729847502637592011-02-14T10:07:48.567-08:002011-02-14T10:07:48.567-08:00Whoa, another intriguing offering. Nice combinatio...Whoa, another intriguing offering. Nice combination of potentially creepy aspects with sweet ones.<br /><br />Nice.Donna K. Weaverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17158114738303231773noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-75692187980838014022011-02-14T09:54:39.016-08:002011-02-14T09:54:39.016-08:00I think every girl (or boy, for that matter) who h...I think every girl (or boy, for that matter) who has ever had a crush can relate to the second paragraph, about being able to imagine everything about that first kiss and then the reality being different; I'm glad the kiss lived up to her dreams. And I love when a girl stands on her tiptoes to kiss a boy, it's too cute for words.<br /><br />The ending definitely has a dark element to it, and I'm curious about the comment she makes about Constantine's hands on her-- it sounds like there was violent involved unless I'm reading too much into it. Something about the connotations of 'laying a hand' on someone. Great scene!<br />- Sophia.Sophiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17926811798176739307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-3051972166656280392011-02-14T09:52:44.706-08:002011-02-14T09:52:44.706-08:00Awesome. Now I'm itching to know what's ha...Awesome. Now I'm itching to know what's happened (and what will happen, darn it. lol). I'm so looking forward to reading this when you've finished it :)Lindsayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04313619484424363895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-89063916843869936042011-02-14T08:53:28.272-08:002011-02-14T08:53:28.272-08:00I liked this! Definitely made me want to find out...I liked this! Definitely made me want to find out who was calling her name and what the deal is. Easily slipped into her world! Very nice!Creepy Query Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18115161057496086972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-66601963888293698122011-02-14T08:41:06.212-08:002011-02-14T08:41:06.212-08:00Wow. This was just lovely and so intriguing!! That...Wow. This was just lovely and so intriguing!! That voice at the end...!! Wow!! Well done you - this has passion and tension in just the right teasing doses!! Thanks for sharing! Take care<br />xOld Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13185547869183611159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-83438797225501966192011-02-14T08:40:31.839-08:002011-02-14T08:40:31.839-08:00I absolutely love this scene. I love the tension y...I absolutely love this scene. I love the tension you've set up between the characters, and I love the end. I'd love to read more!<br /><br />I'm your newest follower.<br /><a rel="nofollow">bethfred.com</a>Bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09962862566388212238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-47613140509057292732011-02-14T06:50:02.937-08:002011-02-14T06:50:02.937-08:00Ooh. Spooky. A little Halloween on Valentines Day ...Ooh. Spooky. A little Halloween on Valentines Day :)Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13544703229078531691noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-61219640250481552422011-02-14T06:41:40.952-08:002011-02-14T06:41:40.952-08:00Aww man! Why did you leave us hanging like that? G...Aww man! Why did you leave us hanging like that? Great stuff! :)Pam Harrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09872183610393667619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-13209660155460440602011-02-14T06:38:22.627-08:002011-02-14T06:38:22.627-08:00Must know what happens next! Lovely kiss though, g...Must know what happens next! Lovely kiss though, great emotions. Man, I'm really intrigued. Well done. Nice meeting youLindz Pagelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04663646312808701883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-85007780507257877532011-02-14T06:26:31.042-08:002011-02-14T06:26:31.042-08:00You really captured the moment here. Well done. It...You really captured the moment here. Well done. It feels very polished and real. Would love to read more. You're not published yet??? Sacrilege!<br /> Nice meeting you. :)PK HREZOhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11650153097981426833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-74318962438027200342011-02-14T06:20:56.275-08:002011-02-14T06:20:56.275-08:00LOVED the way this ended. I'd eagerly keep rea...LOVED the way this ended. I'd eagerly keep reading. Funny, I have a YA horror, and my MC's name is Lela! We must be joined at the cerebrum.Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06636585111057799728noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-39232814582694988412011-02-14T06:12:20.275-08:002011-02-14T06:12:20.275-08:00AS Joey would say "WHOA!!!" I like how s...AS Joey would say "WHOA!!!" I like how she says, "Always." And whose voice is it at the end--it's a YA horror? LOVE, girlie!Christina Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01799776834213400246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-19310047890205500522011-02-14T05:48:46.570-08:002011-02-14T05:48:46.570-08:00Argh! What a place to end!!!! I'm itching to s...Argh! What a place to end!!!! I'm itching to see what happened! This is the only bad thing about blogfests. Nice job!<br /><br />~JDJEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12390400360357693403noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-33460304802418572162011-02-14T05:11:44.873-08:002011-02-14T05:11:44.873-08:00What a cliffhanger! The emotions of what we hype u...What a cliffhanger! The emotions of what we hype up things to be and their reality, you capture that really well.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06732854288433860194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-44073148212262032712011-02-14T04:51:44.486-08:002011-02-14T04:51:44.486-08:00Oh no! What happens next?
It might not have been ...Oh no! What happens next?<br /><br />It might not have been the first kiss, but at least she finally gets to kiss her dream guy. :DStinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11415189347501942340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-28901395365991115892011-02-14T03:52:44.609-08:002011-02-14T03:52:44.609-08:00Very nice! It makes me wonder what experience Lei...Very nice! It makes me wonder what experience Leila had before -- some other first kiss and some other hands on her that didn't measure up to this.<br /><br />And I like the idea of this important moment coming in such an unexpected place and in a way she never expected.Dianne K. Salernihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16459839567235304842noreply@blogger.com