tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post846295136899079637..comments2024-02-18T07:27:48.299-08:00Comments on Amparo Ortiz: New Creation BLOGFEST!!Amparo Ortizhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05751368034351196820noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-40193651323333022262011-01-08T12:19:19.272-08:002011-01-08T12:19:19.272-08:00Good on you for posting more than one sentence of ...Good on you for posting more than one sentence of the ending! Defy convention and all that. And I love the 'we make our own Destiny' feel of those four lines.<br /><br />I really like the possibility of getting a hug from Hitler too. Do we know much about his private life? Was he nice to his family and loved ones??<br /><br />Thanks for taking part in this blogfest. I signed up late, but I'd love to know what you think of my sentences!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-8566254891644159302011-01-06T07:33:54.542-08:002011-01-06T07:33:54.542-08:00Stopping by for the blogfest!
How disturbing to f...Stopping by for the blogfest! <br />How disturbing to find yourself meeting Hitler when you open your eyes for the first time-- although how would you know??? lots of questions! Interesting! <br /><br />And your last line was perfectly fine standing alone. Very nice!Danettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15043881305977386629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-36614548438440326662011-01-05T22:11:55.623-08:002011-01-05T22:11:55.623-08:00The first sentence! GAH! Now I want to read this b...The first sentence! GAH! Now I want to read this book. How could you do this to me???Melissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12096764010151024050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-75620819936856610902011-01-05T18:42:24.663-08:002011-01-05T18:42:24.663-08:00Oh, I LOVE the opening line for the YA historical ...Oh, I LOVE the opening line for the YA historical fantasy! Please write this book!Caroline Tung Richmondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10668185436035686911noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-39691187824791555232011-01-05T17:40:17.978-08:002011-01-05T17:40:17.978-08:00I enjoyed both sentences. You made me think, the o...I enjoyed both sentences. You made me think, the opening is very unusual.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15459671422564355990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-13137224184637636112011-01-05T15:18:18.697-08:002011-01-05T15:18:18.697-08:00Definitely interesting opening line! :) I'm o...Definitely interesting opening line! :) I'm off to check out other entries. <br /><a href="http://lisadgibson.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow"><strong>Lisa ~ YA Literature Lover</strong></a>Lisa_Gibsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17238496789960349077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-82540612859137598872011-01-05T13:59:11.296-08:002011-01-05T13:59:11.296-08:00Wow. Your new first line is awesome! Wow. Sorry, I...Wow. Your new first line is awesome! Wow. Sorry, I just had to add another wow.<br /><br />The old line(s) has left me wanting to know more!Ellie Garratthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03731071128348213067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-764341800528408842011-01-05T12:06:14.649-08:002011-01-05T12:06:14.649-08:00Very cool! Interesting first line!!!Very cool! Interesting first line!!!Stephaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17401931638397651614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-83062810363295948982011-01-05T11:56:41.055-08:002011-01-05T11:56:41.055-08:00You definitely could have just posted the last lin...You definitely could have just posted the last line... It's fantastic!<br /><br />You next one is disturbing..... but in a good way.<br /><br /><br />MichaelMichael Di Gesuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-90774828870075187842011-01-05T11:56:24.787-08:002011-01-05T11:56:24.787-08:00...obviously not because Hitler hugs the MC, but b......obviously not because Hitler hugs the MC, but because I know your mind works in awesome ways.Lindsayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04313619484424363895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-11775452940899093492011-01-05T11:55:20.020-08:002011-01-05T11:55:20.020-08:00Hmm. The new sentence is interesting. I have a fee...Hmm. The new sentence is interesting. I have a feeling it will be deliciously wonderful. :)Lindsayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04313619484424363895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-11223848039553948772011-01-05T11:08:18.287-08:002011-01-05T11:08:18.287-08:00Great lines! The new one is rather interesting, I&...Great lines! The new one is rather interesting, I'm not sure I'd want to be an MC in that wip either. LOL Thank you Fairy much for ParticipatingSummer Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08122694893668693244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-22404595880216864242011-01-05T10:29:41.388-08:002011-01-05T10:29:41.388-08:00I don't think a lot of our entries make sense ...I don't think a lot of our entries make sense alone (last sentence only) but it shows I think quite a bit about the voice of the writer- that last sentence is great-strong, on its own!<br /><br />~bruFebruary Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01078037856070486022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-87509919035596443042011-01-05T10:19:03.102-08:002011-01-05T10:19:03.102-08:00Those are both great! The opening line made me lau...Those are both great! The opening line made me laugh and wonder, what the heck?!Mara Nashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14628961488068784772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-61483283304663127502011-01-05T09:45:10.298-08:002011-01-05T09:45:10.298-08:00The last lines of 2010: I love the positive hopefu...The last lines of 2010: I love the positive hopefulness of this ending!! I'm like "go for it!!"<br /><br />The first line of 2011: Whoa!!!! What a great first line - I'm hooked!!<br /><br />Take care<br />xOld Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13185547869183611159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-9957719552199299872011-01-05T09:33:30.469-08:002011-01-05T09:33:30.469-08:00Multiple exclamation points for that second senten...Multiple exclamation points for that second sentence!!!!Elena Solodowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03037029195682225565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3917729637280439180.post-86175319179551919712011-01-05T09:02:09.768-08:002011-01-05T09:02:09.768-08:00Wow, that is random! Yet it could totally go toget...Wow, that is random! Yet it could totally go together. This is a cool idea. The end of a book is really just a new beginning. <br /><br />I especially like your ending sentences. I'm tempted to check out other entries in this blogfest now.Katrina L. Lantzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06871272394922775923noreply@blogger.com