First up, I would like to take a moment to thank the uber-smart and insightful Laura Diamond! Aside from having such a cool blog (and YA manuscript that I'm dying to read!), Miss Diamond kindly featured me on her Up and Coming Blogger Tuesdays. Not sure I deserve it, but don't tell her that...
Also, she posted a picture of Jensen Ackles!!! Fangirl scream!!!
Yes, I know he's engaged to someone else (a very gorgeous and talented someone else...). But still, my heart is his. The end.
Anyway, I wanted to talk a bit about something I've been meaning to discuss. Many writers stress over plot, voice, climax, yadda yadda yadda... Don't get me wrong: all of that is important. But something I really look forward to reading every time I pick up a new book is...
The opening lines.
I love them. Sometimes they decide whether I keep reading with enthusiasm or if I just read to finish what I started. Most newbie writers make the mistake of opening their book with the weather, or with a character waking up and brushing their teeth, or doing something action-packed that ends up being a dream.
Trust me, I've been that newbie writer. I am that newbie writer. *shudders from embarrassment*
So, I'm going to share some examples from the published pros I love. My goal is to feature at least ten of them.
Here's the first:
"You never think it will happen to you." --Ghostgirl, Tonya Hurley.
I don't know about you, but I'm left with a million questions right off the bat. What don't I think will ever happen to me? How does the MC feel about this thing that's supposed to happen to everybody? Is it good or bad? Does the story revolve around this mystery thing?
Needless to say, that opening line does exactly what the author wanted it to: get you to read further. It doesn't have to be mouth-hanging-open shocking to prompt you to flip through those pages. Something simple, yet vague, usually does the trick in a better way.
So there you have it, my first favorite opening line. More are still to come, peeps. Pinky swear.
Now off to write!